Thursday, October 9, 2014

Post 5 Rhyme Scheme - Jasa Harris

Your World

BY GEORGIA DOUGLAS JOHNSON
Your world is as big as you make it.
I know, for I used to abide
In the narrowest nest in a corner,
My wings pressing close to my side.
 
But I sighted the distant horizon
Where the skyline encircled the sea
And I throbbed with a burning desire
To travel this immensity.
 
I battered the cordons around me
And cradled my wings on the breeze,
Then soared to the uttermost reaches
With rapture, with power, with ease!

Johnson, Georgia D. "Your World." Poetry
Foundation. Poetry Foundation, 2001. Web. 06 Oct. 2014. http://www.poetryfoundation.org/poem/246766

The rhyme scheme of this poem is ABCBDEFEGHIH where the second line of each stanza rhymes with the last line. This poem is about reaching your full potential. The first stanza details how everyone recognizes the endless possibilities of life, but some often are not ready to fulfill their potential. But then the next stanza moves on to discuss that a time will come when everyone will be ready to take great strides in life. And finally, the third stanza tells of how after reaching your full potential you’ll feel free and empowered. In the first stanza the rhyming words “abide” and “side” are masculine, while in the last stanza the rhyming words “breeze” and “ease” are more feminine. This represents the entire shift of the poem. At the beginning Johnson discusses how you could feel timid when posed with so many options in life, but by the last stanza Johnson tells of the empowerment of conquering your world. Also, in lines 6 and 8 “sea” and “immensity” are more slant rhymes and this could be to emphasize them more. Both words represent the vastness of life, there are really endless possibilities for you to accomplish in your world. Also, Johnson wanted to highlight this stanza because it basically says that everyone will get their moment to discover who they are and what they want to do. And when you come across it, you’ll have this fierce feeling and know that you must achieve your goals. 

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